Sofia ([info]netweight) wrote,

Ficlet. "Till the next time the world ends". A/B/F/S

I'm not totally happy with this. I just tossed it all together because I've seen that one of the unmet requests at [info]buffyverse1000 was Angel/Buffy/Faith/Spike and I've been dying to write them for ages. So I decided to give it a shot. (A reprieve from the fic of doom. Ah!)

But I dunno. Constructive criticism and suggestions are welcome. And if you spot any mistakes, please let me know.



Till the next time the world ends



Once upon a time this could not have been. Now, in the days of the never after, the time of the impossible, of survival and almost normality, it feels inevitable and not in the way of prophecies. Just the natural order of things. Funds and freedom, Buffy had joked.

They still have duties and missions and distance holding them apart. But the world is a smaller place and the remoteness is only physical and can be bridged in the space of hours. Isolation of the heart is more difficult to overcome but they’ve mended the holes through maturity and acceptance and the dread of loss makes forgiveness and reconciliation simple. You mourn the dead and love the living. Treasure the fact that they are alive in the first place.

Awkwardness lasted little time in those first few days, none of them truly surprised at their respective choice of pairings. And after they shouted the accusations and the fear they fell into a heap of bodies and heat and let the consummating reality of it all envelop them and make them whole and strong. Laughed at their lack of shame and felt good about themselves.

They take reassurance in the mundane and in the oddness alike. Remember shared tastes and find new ones, play familiar clichés, Buffy and Angel eloping to the beaches of the Gulf, romantic getaway of tepid waters and warm breezes, re-acquaintance with half-forgotten moments of perfection and the discovery of carnality, while Faith and Spike abandon themselves to orgies of demon-slaying, alcohol and rhythm on the dance-floors of LA and listen to blues and punk sprawled on the floor in the mellow of the afternoons. Gather to watch bad Van Damme movies that Angel abhors and the others love. “I don’t know how you can stand to watch that crap” countered by Spike with “intellectual honesty”, whatever that means, popcorn and snark. They leave to dark rooms to do their demon thing, blood and tenderness, unspeakable things conveyed in the purity of raw touch. Arms round each other, Faith and Buffy sleep in a tangle of feminine limbs, curves fitting together seamlessly, two parts of a whole, still the two. They don’t want to be alone anymore. Angel and Faith talk quietly, a habit of confidence from her prison years and implicit trust and respect from even before. They’ve seen the worst of each other and she bears the mark but some things they too leave unspoken. She asks about Connor but not about Wesley. And some things are only remembered once. “I’m sorry.” “I’m sorry too.”

And when they part ways to Rome and parts unknown they know they’ll return. Again and again. Fighting the fight. Till the next time the world ends.
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[info]kita0610

December 14 2004, 08:59:49 UTC 7 years ago

This was lovely.

And believable.

Also, kinda hot. *G*

Errors- eh, some commas missing here and there, but otherwise, just spot on.

Loved it.

And as I use my FF icon, I start pondering the parallels....oooh.

[info]netweight

December 14 2004, 10:31:32 UTC 7 years ago

More praise than I was expecting. *blush* (And probably deserve. *G*)

Thank you. :)

And as I use my FF icon, I start pondering the parallels....oooh.

Totally! Romany once pointed out that they mirror each other and I too was struck by the obviousness of it - in a "duh me!" way *G*. But it was the first and only time I've seen it mentioned. And it's just... guh! It would be awesome to see it explored.

[info]just_eunice

December 14 2004, 09:41:11 UTC 7 years ago

I...I just love you. That's all.

[info]netweight

December 14 2004, 10:33:11 UTC 7 years ago

Right back at you. I am very happy you liked it. :)

[info]regala_electra

December 14 2004, 17:18:02 UTC 7 years ago

*loves you*

And damn, yes. Mmm.

[info]netweight

December 15 2004, 07:51:20 UTC 7 years ago

OT4, girlfriend. ;)

*loves you too*

[info]lynnenne

December 14 2004, 21:06:07 UTC 7 years ago

I loved that. Just loved it. I remember Romany's comments about the FF parallels, and I squeed with joy at the thought of someone exploring it. I'm glad you decided to take her up on it.

I especially loved this:

She asks about Connor but not about Wesley. And some things are only remembered once. “I’m sorry.” “I’m sorry too.”

Poignant and lovely.

[info]netweight

December 15 2004, 07:54:33 UTC 7 years ago

Oh I've been trying to write them for years. But the scenarios never seemed natural – too contrived, not a natural outgrow of canon, you know? However, in a post NFA setting it's easy to bring them together. Or it should be but I suspect a longer piece focusing on the four of them would still be difficult to pull off (never mind parallels with the FF - though I'd too love to see that ;}).

Thank you for the feedback. I strive for the emotional resonance so it's always wonderful to know someone thinks I got it right. ;)

[info]redbrickrose

December 14 2004, 23:14:16 UTC 7 years ago

Oh, wonderful. Well-written and believable. I just love it. It makes sense that the four of them would find each other like that. (And yes, the fanged four parallels are striking).

[info]netweight

December 15 2004, 07:57:45 UTC 7 years ago

You just said the magic words. Well-written and believable. :)

I love the prettiness of language (I think it has something to do with no being a native speaker) and am Miss Believability Pants (dude, we've got so much canon and subtext to draw from almost any combinations are possible – why not make the small effort required to lend the story plausibility? Ack, this is an old rant, ignore.)

Thank you for the feedback. Truly. I'm very glad you liked it.

[info]mairead_pt

December 20 2004, 04:37:38 UTC 7 years ago

Just read this (been lazy) and loved it. :)

<- [info]no_clarity

Decided to add you to my "normal" LJ cause I like you (I normally only add Portuguese people to the other one cause of all the dramaaaaaaaaaa, lol, but I don't think you're a normal Portuguese :P).

So yeah, I doubt you'll add me back but feel free to snoop around the lj that I actually bother to update.

[info]netweight

December 21 2004, 17:03:14 UTC 7 years ago

What do you mean I'm not normal? Don't other people go running around writing foursomes? *IS SHOCKED*

Thank you for both the feedback (so much!) and the addiction to the LJ you update. (Yay for regularly updated LJ's! I'll snoop. *G*)

Also - I bought the Firefly DVD. ;)

[info]mairead_pt

December 21 2004, 17:38:09 UTC 7 years ago

Firefly rules :D You'll loveeeeeeeeeeee the audio commentaries, hehe, I usually don't bother to watch audio commentaries (with a few small exceptions) but the Firefly ones are great.

Also, if you're taking suggestions, Wonderfalls. You'll like Wonderfalls. I can't wait until it comes out on DVD in February.

[info]viciouswishes

July 16 2005, 20:46:05 UTC 6 years ago

This is very lovely.

[info]netweight

July 16 2005, 22:48:19 UTC 6 years ago

Thank you. :)
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